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08 May 2008 @ 05:45 pm
So before I lose my nerve...  
Title: Light
Author: chatty-cat
Characters: Michael Schofield/Sara Tancredi
Rating: PG
Summary: No matter how dark the tunnel, there is always light at the end.


He had been surrounded by darkness many times. Both physically and metaphorically. There had always been a way out, the closet door had been opened, his brother’s execution had been stayed. Looking around him, all he saw was a never-ending night, the soft sounds of the sea cresting on the shore let him know that the water was close by, but even that he was unable to see. The darkness was much too thick, too all encompassing. 

The last few months had taken their toll, lives had been lost and ruined because of him. Maybe this was his penance, his purgatory. A darkness he would be unable to shed, unable to claw his way through. 

He heard her before he felt the soft, silken brush of her skin against his as she joined him on the sand. “Have you been out here all night?” It was a simple question, and the soft caress of her hand on his shoulder let him know that she was concerned. 

“Yes”, simple questions call for simple answers. Silence followed and he felt the pull of the night once again. The simple reprieve from his thoughts that she had brought, fading. 

“You know Michael, there is always light at the end of the tunnel. Sometimes you just need to know where to look.” Squeezing his shoulder, she rose, turned and walked back to the house they had called home for the past month. He glanced, confused in her direction then a soft smile tugged at his lips. 

Behind the house a line of light pink and orange was emerging. The sun peaking through the night, saying hello to the day once again. Maybe the darkness would always follow him, but at least he knew that eventually darkness ends, the night falls away and light, daylight comes once again. 
 
 
Current Mood: nervous
 
 
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danni18[info]danni18 on May 9th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
I like it. I liked how you tied things form S1,2 and 3 into it. I loved how Sara reassured him.
chatty_cat[info]chatty_cat on May 9th, 2008 04:23 am (UTC)
Thank you! It's my first fic that I have put up ever, so it was definitely nerve wracking doing it. I'm glad you liked it.
wrldpossibility: PB sara and michael together[info]wrldpossibility on May 9th, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
Great use of 'light at the end of the tunnel'! I like that you referenced the darkness that's surrounded him since S1, and it's so good to have a hopeful ending!
chatty_cat: mshands[info]chatty_cat on May 9th, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
Hopeful endings are nice, I like hopeful. I wasn't entirely sure if 'light at the end of the tunnel' was a cliche or not, but I went with it anyway.

Thanks for reading!
i want this to last forever[info]linzi20 on May 9th, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
ohh, don't be nervous! This is really good!!

Thanks for sharing :)
chatty_cat[info]chatty_cat on May 9th, 2008 03:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you! *blushes*

I'm so happy you liked it and thought it was good.
Rosie: Michael/Sara green[info]rosie_spleen on May 9th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
Cathy! Good for you, posting your first fic. It's always a bit of a nerve racking experience, but this is really good.

I love the cliche about the tunnel you have selected. Very appropriate for a better life ahead, and so well applied to what they have been through to 'leave' their problems at Fox River and through the past seasons

Great to see you writing.
chatty_cat: fencems[info]chatty_cat on May 9th, 2008 03:08 pm (UTC)
A bit nerve racking?! *g* It took me a few (or several) days to finally decide to actually post it, but it turns out I'm happy I did.

I am so very happy that you liked it! It means so much to have people actually think it was good!
Telperaca: Step Up[info]telperaca on May 9th, 2008 07:34 pm (UTC)
Hey hun,
That was a good effort, and I enjoyed it!
Hope to see more work by you soon! *huggles*
*Leaves chocolate*
chatty_cat: sarasmile[info]chatty_cat on May 9th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the huggles and chocolate! *g*

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to write more, but we'll have to see if I can calm my nerves a little.
The happy one with passed Finals: Scofield blues[info]lizparker6 on May 9th, 2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
Liked it very much. A nice use of - the light at the end of the tunnel. Skillfully written. :)
chatty_cat: went2[info]chatty_cat on May 10th, 2008 12:58 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
eight8toes: hug!sucre!michael[info]eight8toes on May 15th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
Welcome aboard! well.. i say that, but i'm not even writing, lol.. but i'm reading! And I read you story, and I loved it. I loved the ending, mostly, how the house, their home, where Sara currently is, is bathed in the light of the rising sun.

Hope to read more from you soon!
chatty_cat: saraeyes[info]chatty_cat on May 15th, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
Hi. *waves*

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you thought it was good. I'm hoping to write more but as I mentioned, this was nerve racking! *g* I have something sort of planned out, so we'll see what happens.
just call me happy: Michael in Sona - Prison Break[info]happywriter06 on May 21st, 2008 04:01 pm (UTC)
Great job for a firt time. Great use of the cliche you used. Very fitting.
chatty_cat[info]chatty_cat on May 21st, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you!